Cleanse Fire, the first book of the Kinir Elite chronicles by Anastasia V. Pergakis, is a fun new take on a classic genre: high fantasy. By this, I mean the tradition of J.R.R and Dragonlance, but with an added dash of military thriller. In Cleanse Fire, the Elves we are introduced to are part of an elite fighting squadron known as the Kinir Elite; they may look like gorgeous elves, but they fight like Marines.
But enough set-up, here’s the meat. The plot is engaging, and calls to mind some of the military thrillers of Dan Brown (no, not Angels and Demons, but the Scarecrow series, much better stuff) as well as the fantasy styling of Dragonlance. The characters themselves have complex backgrounds and are not the simple one dimensional critters you sometimes find in fantasy novels that rely solely on their mythical race to provide depth. These characters are full-fledged characters.
The only negatives come in the mechanics of the writing, and those I think can be chalked up entirely to the fact that this is the first of what is sure to be a fun series. The plot and characters are enough to carry you over the rough spots, that’s for sure; and, as the stories continue, I know the writing is going to mature wonderfully.
Though one of the best aspects of the whole thing? Part of the cover price goes to charity. That’s right, a portion of each sale goes to the Wounded Warrior Project, a charity dedicated to supporting wounded veterans. That in itself is totally worth the $4.99 Kindle price, where it is available now. Hardcopy books are available starting on December 21st.
I own a Kindle, though it may be a twice handed-me-down through my family and attached to my father’s Amazon account where I only pull down free books (and whatever he chooses to buy), but I am intrigued by this new Lending Library concept from Amazon. On the surface, it seem like an excellent idea. With your Amazon Prime membership, you can read books for free on your Kindle. The downside is, you can read 12 a year, max. And at that, only one a month. Admittedly, I love the concept of Prime for two day free shipping (particularly when I had it for free), and the books on top of that are basically icing when you think how much free shipping I’ve gotten out of the deal before.
But here’s what I want, Amazon. I want unlimited lending for a flat fee a year. I’ll take the restriction of only being allowed to have one book out at a time. That makes sense. But I want one fee that allows me to borrow as many books during the year as I can actually read. A rare book may take me a month to read, but the majority of them will only take me a couple days, max a week. I understand Amazon’s market plan of making money not from their devices, but from content, but I still feel that the artificial restraints placed on the lending system are…awkward. So, here’s my suggested alternate plan:
One option is to charge a flat rate for a year-long subscription, with different levels of subscription depending on how much someone expects to read. Someone like me would be willing to pay, oh, $100-$150 a year for a subscription as I would still be paying less than $3 a book. Or, another option, is paying a minute amount of money per rental, say $1. Then you keep it as long as you need to read it, trade it in for the next, and shell out another $1. That model seems to be working well for the day-of movie rental business. And both of these models reduce the uncomfortable restriction of being able to only rent 12 books a year.
That said, I’m glad that Amazon is working on the Lending Library system for the Kindle, it is overdue!
Turn Right at Machu Picchu by Mark Adams was a thoroughly enjoyable book. Usually, I am not someone who voluntarily picks up non-fiction, but I was drawn to this book as it covers a location that I am most keen in visiting eventually: Machu Picchu.
When I first heard about the book, it was billed as one man’s journey through the ruins of Peru and, eventually, Machu Picchu. What you get, however, is a blending of three stories. You have the history of the conquistadors in Peru and the resulting insurgent war, then you have Hiram Bingham trying to find the lost city of the Incas in 1911 and then you have Mark Adams following in the footsteps of that explorer, retracing the roads and paths that Bingham originally traveled.
Adams does a magnificent job weaving the three story lines together so you are not lost at any step and each informs and enriches the other. There are modern travel tips nestled in next to references from ancient religious tracts written by visiting priests–and neither seem out of place. The only hiccup in reading comes from the liberal use of Qechua names, which is only appropriate, given the context of the story. But I am someone who can’t move on until I’ve figure out how each one could be pronounced, and I would then promptly forget be the time I saw the name next. Thus, it took a bit longer to get through than my usual, but it was still highly enjoyable.
I would definitely recommend giving this book a once through if you enjoy true life adventure texts or are at all interested in the Inca history of Peru. It is well researched and splendidly presented for an overall informative and delightful read.
NaNoWriMo has just begun and here are some helpful hints for those of you attempting this Quixotian enterprise:
1) Write everyday. Don’t take a break for your birthday, or hospital visits, or just because your hamster died. If you have a fever of 104, write! Look how well Tropic of Cancer sells and he wrote that entire thing when he was blasted out of his mind…
2) Don’t fool yourself into thinking you are writing the next best seller. You are not. If you are lucky, you’re going to produce something your mother will tell you is quite nice. Have realistic expectations for output and you will be much happier come December 1st.
3) Don’t write without a plan. Sit down first and figure out who your characters are, what they mean to each other, and kind of where you want the story to go. Otherwise you’re going to get to page 200 and realize that nothing has actually happened yet.
and 4) For the love of all that is holy, please, please, PLEASE go back and edit before you try and share your collection of sleep-deprived words with anyone else. A month to bang out around 80,000 words is enough time to get them out, but not enough time to make them good. If you think on December 1st that you’re going to be sending out your work to agents and publishers, be prepared for a lot of rejection, because that’s all you’re going to get. And if you self-publish? It is not going to sell. Take the next year to edit, then maybe it will be something that can stand up to actual scrutiny.
With that being said, start your engines, pick up your pencils, start the coffee, whatever it is that’ll get you going, and have fun. Don’t get hung up on the word count, the timeline, or anything. Just write because the words won’t stay down and they just have to come out.
The site is now up and running, fully functional, la-de-da! As soon as the rest of my life is in order, I shall attempt to actually start a serious blog about the creative in the everyday life…be it writing, design, or anything in-between!
I’m working on getting this site up and running, but in the mean time, patience is appreciated!
Shortly, I shall have examples of my writing and design work up for perusal including, but not limited to: fiction, non-fiction, book design, interior design, and clothing design.
See you soon!